पण पाऊस काही थांबेना. गल्लीतील गटार उसळले. वासूच्या स्वयंपाकघराची खिडकी चिखलाने माखली. शेजारच्या सुलोचना काकूंनी आवाज दिला, “वासू, पाणी शिरतंय घरात!”
| Mistake | Why It’s Bad | |---------|---------------| | Slow buildup | Readers expect action from page one. | | Hero wins too easily | No tension. Zavazavi requires struggle. | | Too many characters | Confusing. Stick to 5–7 main figures. | | Hero uses guns only | Fist/knife/stick fights feel more personal. | | Villain has no motive | Even a monster needs a reason (greed, revenge, pride). | | Weak ending | The final fight must be longer and harder than previous ones. | marathi zavazavi katha hot